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WE GET IT SHE IS BEAUTIFUL
"clinging, crying, young and beautiful"
It's like a Harry Potter title. Just throw some adjectives in the front and add young and beautiful.

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"Young and beautiful and confused."
What else can a man search in a woman? What am I reading? This starts to get in my nerves.

Sorry, me again 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 "And yet, she'd felt very young and beautiful"
Please tell me how you can feel beauty, like what? You touched her hand and what? Her skin was smooth so her face should be pretty too? Christian Fiction Authors should finally understand thet not all people are pretty... really, you insult people out there with your examples of ugliness.

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Give me a break! What was that? New experiences with authors shouldn't be this cringe worthy from the very first page. He kissed her and then asked her if she is 60 years old! Like.. HOW CAN YOU MISTAKE A 60 YEAR OLD PERSON WITH A YOUNG ONE EVEN IN THE DARK!😂🤣