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Ivan
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A deity having a monologue about how its laugh could be even more menacing. This reads like it was taken from a teenage boy's "cool things for villains to talk about" notebook.
— May 28, 2021 01:29AM
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Ivan
is on page 136 of 666
The Death will take someone close to you in exchange for your life
"No, I beg of you!"
"Be quiet"
"Time to leave"
"Ok, but no final riddles, please".
This is what passes for dialogue in this mess of a novel.
— May 28, 2021 01:33AM
"No, I beg of you!"
"Be quiet"
"Time to leave"
"Ok, but no final riddles, please".
This is what passes for dialogue in this mess of a novel.
Ivan
is on page 124 of 666
So far, terrible. Horrible dialogue, rambling sentences, characters with no personalities. People die with great pomp and I could not care less. It's difficult finding reasons to continue.
— May 26, 2021 07:05AM
