Jill Stark’s Reviews > The Bastard's Crown > Status Update
Jill Stark
is 80% done
The information is good but the development of characters is a bit lacking. There are so many key characters that as soon as the author builds a story for them, they move onto a different character. Add to that the lack of editing (sorry, grammar snob) and a potential 4-5 only gets a 3-star review.
— Jan 14, 2014 08:42AM
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