Mark’s Reviews > The Jumbies > Status Update

It's not holding my attention as hoped. So, I compared ratings in Amazon (~4.7 / 5) and GoodReads (~3.9 / 5).. Interesting disparity. I'm reading critically to pick out exactly what could be improved. Initially, I say that, detail is good, character development is medium (I don't feel like I know them) and relationship info seems always spread out and mixed in the detail. The feeling for characters is fairly surface.