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Elena
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Ughhhhh!! All sex and introspection, no plot! Now, this being erotica i would totally be ok with just hot sex, however the heroine has tedious inner monologues and they are a total buzz-kill!!!!
— Jan 16, 2014 08:51PM
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Elena
is on page 331 of 336
Every time the scene gets really hot, she starts thinking and we have to deal with her inner turmoil!! Its either: A) "oh im such a slut, is this ok?! Will he view me differently after? ". OR B) "omg, i think i love them both, that cant be right, who will i chose, i feel so guilty!!" Ok thanks ... This is supposed to be a fantasy (i mean sexy fantasy, not sci-fi ;)) ) not an installment of Dr. Phil !!!
— Jan 16, 2014 08:55PM
