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The best way to keep my interest on a boring story is to have flashbacks and back and forths of who might be watching from the POV of characters I don't know.
— Jun 17, 2021 11:39AM
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There's a scene where some characters throw a manuscript(?) in a fire to burn without being read and honestly, I think this might have been too on point for what should have happened here.
— Jun 19, 2021 07:53AM
