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Oooh that sounded bad. I want to be with you the way you plan on being with your fiancé. I meant together! A relationship! Charlotte I don’t know if you’ve heard what’s going on but I know where you are and I’m coming to find you. Stay safe, please china doll!


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The interactions were so great and believable before this.

Ok what the hell is going on?

The first half of the book is so brilliant.

Now the author is actively undoing all the awesomness.

‘I didn’t come back here to see if I could live off Donoghue’s without the Brisbane one as well. I bought the one here a year ago after Sheneille cheated-’ he looked at her. ‘Because you were here. And I needed a reason to keep coming up.’

Ooook...

Super weird way to have Will confront Liam.

Soap operas make more sense than this...

The most anticlimactic kiss followed by lame forced zombie danger.

This book was on its way to five stars...

The book was do great until this point.

I loved the h. Smart. Relatable. A badass in her own way. But then this super weird scene happens and she also gets back in the car with him.

I like for the h to have strength in dark stories. Makes the dynamic more exciting.

Right now shes coming off impulsive and weird in a mentally stunted way.