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D.M. Kilgore
is 11% done
I almost stopped reading after the prologue, then I thought maybe the editor just missed that part. 11% in and mistakes are everywhere... messing up what might be a decent story. Big errors like "Envelop EnvelopEed" and left out words, and sentences that were obviously changed but the old parts weren't deleted. Ugh. I'm a stickler I know, only a few chapters in and I'm ready to toss it. At least it was free. =/
— Jan 23, 2014 06:49AM
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D.M. Kilgore
is finished
AWFUL! What a waste of my book-fund money. Not happy.
— Jan 25, 2014 06:52AM
D.M. Kilgore
is 11% done
I almost stopped reading after the prologue, then I thought maybe the editor just missed that part. 11% in and mistakes are everywhere... messing up what might be a decent story. Big errors like "Envelop EnvelopEed" and left out words, and sentences that were obviously changed but the old parts weren't deleted. Ugh. I'm a stickler I know, but only a few chapters in and I'm ready to toss it. =/
— Jan 23, 2014 06:53AM
