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CHAPTER 7 So far I honestly don't like the narrator nor the narration style. The writing feels disjointed at times or even illogical. For mid twentys characters they feel childish especially Ben, he acts more like a brooding teen than a grieving father. The overall lack of comunicantion between the institution and the people is plain ridiculous if we are talking about it lasting over centuries.
Jun 24, 2021 06:48AM
The Hunted (Hunter Circles, #1)

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