Onyerbike’s Reviews > Pet Me > Status Update
Onyerbike
is 32% done
Was this even proofread? Only 1/3 of the way through, and one of the MC's names has been misspelled, whose instead of who's, words missing, tenses change mid-sentence. I know it's not Shakespeare, but one read-through by an even half-awake proofer should have caught these. It's a fluffy read, but these dumb errors keep pulling me out of the story.
— Jul 05, 2021 08:23PM
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