Deserthomemaker’s Reviews > Fearless > Status Update
Deserthomemaker
is 49% done
This book needs a competent editor. Mistakes like using affect where it should be effect, thrice instead of trice, and evermore instead of ever more, keep pulling me out of the story.
— Jul 10, 2021 09:57AM
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Deserthomemaker
is 62% done
It’s frustrating to watch the characters bumbling around, clueless, when it was apparent long ago who the villain is.
— Jul 10, 2021 10:42AM
