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Mark Peterson
is 35% done
Three POVs and all in first person. Very jarring. It sometimes takes a whole page just to figure out who's talking.
— Feb 11, 2014 01:56PM
Mark Peterson
is 11% done
The constant use of first person across at least three characters is a bit annoying.
— Feb 06, 2014 08:53AM
