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Cheri
is 5% done
Okay, the head hopping is insane. Another thing that sort of pulls me out of the story is the fact that the text is clearly written by someone from the UK judging by the non-US vocabulary but the narrator is American. Why not get a Brit to do the narration?
Oh, and also all this damn head hopping!! UGH!
— Jul 20, 2021 08:58AM
Oh, and also all this damn head hopping!! UGH!
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Cheri
is 66% done
The idea of the book is good but I’m feeling conflicted about the agreements between the dead wife and the nurse… sort of creepy the way she was scoping out the soon to be widow. It feels sort of gross.
— Jul 20, 2021 01:44PM
Cheri
is 20% done
Still struggling with the hopping but now adding all the identifying women by their hair color. Surely a good editor would point these things out as being amateurish?
Yes, this is my first book by the author and, while I plan to finish this one since it was a review copy, I doubt I'd read another unless more recent books fix these issues.
— Jul 20, 2021 09:42AM
Yes, this is my first book by the author and, while I plan to finish this one since it was a review copy, I doubt I'd read another unless more recent books fix these issues.
