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Baru ms 18, tapi terasa ada sesuatu yang mengganggu kelancaran pembacaan. Kita KIV kejap ye..
— Feb 12, 2014 07:22PM
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Ririn Aziz
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Hmmm....I think it would be better if thoughts/ descriptions etc (described in english) were structed with the whole sentences. Bila tiba-tiba dicampur dengan bahasa Melayu di akhir ayat, terasa seperti impak tu merudum jatuh. Tak menjadi.
— Feb 11, 2014 05:44AM
