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DNF @ 74%. now I remember when why I decided to quit this series. And why I decided to quit this author.
And unnecessary chapter of Wyatt and Nellie having sex. Why?! What was the reason!! Now the time jump regarding the kidnapping and rescue. All of that happened in book 1 so I guess we just not gonna skip it and add instead Wyatt and Nellie sex scene AGAIN!!!!’
— Aug 17, 2021 08:31PM
And unnecessary chapter of Wyatt and Nellie having sex. Why?! What was the reason!! Now the time jump regarding the kidnapping and rescue. All of that happened in book 1 so I guess we just not gonna skip it and add instead Wyatt and Nellie sex scene AGAIN!!!!’
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MARQUETTA
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So we don’t get the scene where tobys family finds out about the twins?? We get a page summary in Toby’s POV?? How did the parents end up at Wy’a! The author assuming the reader has read previous books?! Oh fck no!
— Aug 17, 2021 08:26PM
