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So far, this ain't no action-packed blockbuster. It's all slow character-building so far, but at least I've made it to Part 2 still invested. I look forward to more wonders of the planet being described.
— Aug 26, 2021 09:21PM
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Warwick Stubbs
is on page 166 of 515
The "Biography" conceit of the main character's time on the planet during and after disestablishment is wearing thin. Like Umberto Eco's The Island of the Day Before, I wish I was hearing it all directly from the main character. There feels like a lack of tension and mystery, and events happen without much plot driving.
— Sep 04, 2021 05:28PM
