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Keith [on semi hiatus]
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Dramatic switch in narrative? It's nice writing, a nice story, but it's not totally hitting the spot. Is it a build-up, am I being prepared for things to come? There's something missing for me to get more absorbed into it.
— Aug 29, 2021 07:28AM
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Keith [on semi hiatus]
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See, I too wonder this, I've tried it with Jack and that was just wrong. Bailey's, yep, but nothing else. Will have to try this...
— Aug 29, 2021 12:58PM
Keith [on semi hiatus]
is on page 75 of 126
Entering twisted territory, I believe...
— Aug 29, 2021 12:55PM
Keith [on semi hiatus]
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Reminds me of Scorsese's 'The Big Shave': https://m.imdb.com/title/tt0061402/
— Aug 29, 2021 12:43PM
