Starlight’s Reviews > Luna Touched > Status Update

Redoing bc it got erased. “OH NOO YOU DUMB BITCH NOO..” was the phrase that kept repeating in my head & aloud as I pushed through this. Like the expression of being unable to look away from a train wreck, except it wasn’t even good. I’d read the rest of the books just to find out what happens to these fuckers. My only consolation is being able to use this as a great example for me to avoid writing like this.