Sarah’s Reviews > Untimely Return > Status Update

Danny breaking Alfred's heart again. Geez, she should just tell him bluntly. But the book is turning though, it's a bit confusing but it's good, as like the author is setting the reader up for a WOW... :o) Also brings up questions

I'm taking a break. Not liking Dannika at all, the way she treats Alfred. One minute Love you, the next, I don't want anything to do with you. She has it be on her terms, that I can understand but does she have to be mean about it? Poor Alfred. I'll come back to it tomorrow.

Ruben became Ruben, as he was in U1 after reading this chapter, twisted I am, that made me smile. As much as I like Ruben sweet, just didn't feel like him. OK Maybe I'm being biased too since I've read the first book, can't say right now. As for Dannika... I wanna slap her. Going after a 37 year old man ( The author did make the original character age, didn't they? :o).

In the first few sentences, you are given the history/transition from U1 to U2. That's awesome. Not sure about Dannika yet, being almost 20, she's young, impulsive and a seems like no patience. Alfred on the other hand sounds like Frankie.