~♥I_Luv_2_Read♥~’s Reviews > First Addition > Status Update
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is 47% done
The story is good, but the writing is terrible. The insertion of first person-past in the first person-present is driving me crazy. Not to mention using words that don't mean what's implied.
— Sep 09, 2021 01:20PM
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