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Veronica is on page 241 of 308
"Martin stifled a laugh [directed question to Wells] Martin scowled at Kristina [Answers question]" Character confusion. I believe it is Wells who scowls at Kristina then proceeds to answer. The following sentence structure after the answer is back in the context of Martin.
Mar 09, 2014 05:55PM
Disillusioned (Stan Turner, #9)

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Definitely picked up the pace at the end. I was wondering what happen with Kristina. Then to hear she "sold out" was a bit heartbreaking. Also throughout I was curious as to what Rebekah thoughts really were/are as Stab adventures off. It would be cool to view her thoughts more. This is a late series if the Stan Turner mysteries. I'm considering starting from the beginning to read through the series.
Mar 10, 2014 06:28PM
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Veronica is on page 185 of 308
I feel like Stan is giving out too much information to too many people.
Mar 09, 2014 05:57AM
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Veronica is on page 137 of 308
"This left him dead in his tracts with no idea where to look next" Tracts should be tracks
Mar 03, 2014 12:05PM
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Veronica is on page 108 of 308
"The last think I need is a snake slithering around the house" Think should be thing
Mar 02, 2014 01:54PM
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Veronica is on page 81 of 308
"...I'll take whatever precautions are necessary to protect my myself and my family" delete the first "my"
Feb 23, 2014 05:18PM
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Veronica is on page 78 of 308
"Why don't you come over to the hose this afternoon ..." hose should be house
Feb 23, 2014 05:09PM
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Veronica is on page 58 of 308
Missing quotation marks "there's nothing for you to do up here' "
Feb 23, 2014 11:35AM
Disillusioned (Stan Turner, #9)


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Veronica is on page 46 of 308
Goodreads lists 306 pages, my copy lists 353. (I believe my copy is an advanced edition) Page 46: "There organization is very sophisticated and well run" I believe "there" should be "their"
Feb 23, 2014 11:21AM
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Veronica is on page 40 of 308
Incorrect quotation marks during Stan's conversation with Kristina in Dunkin Donuts. Kind of a slowish start but the drama and story began unfolding around page 20
Feb 23, 2014 08:55AM
Disillusioned (Stan Turner, #9)


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