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Stephen
is 30% done
Interesting story. A bit repetitive in spots but actually very like what teens in that situation would be like. It is a bit weird that 2 of the 3 POV's are presented in 3rd person while one is in 1st person
— Mar 18, 2014 07:31AM
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Stephen
is 75% done
Prose is too life-like. In most fiction some of the repetitive and/or boring bits are cut out of the narrative. This tale could have been a bit like that
— Mar 19, 2014 10:45AM
Stephen
is 65% done
Not everyone reacts to things the same way so my inabaility to understand why the characters react the way I'd expect them to is OK... just wish that the prose was more well crafted. The characters are sympathetic if nothing else.
— Mar 18, 2014 02:18PM
