Kim S’s Reviews > Tortured Dreams > Status Update

Wooh, boy, I'm going to try to slog through this one because it's gotten fairly consistent high ratings, but so far - setting aside the slightly ludicrous story for a moment - the syntax and writing errors are distracting me on almost every page. Just one example for now: "There was at least 30 pictures." This book seems to have seriously suffered from poor or nonexistent editing.