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shai
is on page 333 of 533
Okay, the story develops Sami acceptable. Still the relationship between the two is not so much. I feel like it has potential but…
Sebastian problem is 100% valid. But again the representation is just not good
Actually both of there issues are good but we could explore it in a more in-depth way to humanize them not just make them look like assholes
— Oct 13, 2021 10:32AM
Sebastian problem is 100% valid. But again the representation is just not good
Actually both of there issues are good but we could explore it in a more in-depth way to humanize them not just make them look like assholes
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shai
is on page 263 of 533
Ok I understand the problem with the hero but it just confusing. The writer is writing about 2 confused characters but that does not mean you have to confuse the reader as well! It’s just there are some potential in there.
— Oct 13, 2021 03:19AM
shai
is on page 243 of 533
In the second part I liked the plot twist. But there “ big “fight I don’t understand
— Oct 13, 2021 02:34AM
