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Chapter 33:
I'm thinking that Michael is probably going to end up having a huge fight with Vanessa when she visits him in Atlanta. I'm also betting that she's cheating on him with his brother. Either way, I don't think their relationship is going to last past Atlanta.
— Oct 14, 2021 05:30PM
I'm thinking that Michael is probably going to end up having a huge fight with Vanessa when she visits him in Atlanta. I'm also betting that she's cheating on him with his brother. Either way, I don't think their relationship is going to last past Atlanta.
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Ashlyn
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Chapter 12:
Well, I spoke too soon about forgetting the clothing. But, I hate that it was left alone for so long. Her shirt and bra would have been pushed all the way up her chest. It seems more likely that she would have either pulled them back down or taken them off immediately after being released from the belt. It's just super awkward all around.
— Oct 13, 2021 04:33PM
Well, I spoke too soon about forgetting the clothing. But, I hate that it was left alone for so long. Her shirt and bra would have been pushed all the way up her chest. It seems more likely that she would have either pulled them back down or taken them off immediately after being released from the belt. It's just super awkward all around.
Ashlyn
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Chapter 11:
Well, during her session with Pax, he only pushed her shirt and bra out of the way. But, it seems like the author forgot about that because, by the time Copeland shows up, she's fully naked. It's a little frustrating.
— Oct 13, 2021 04:28PM
Well, during her session with Pax, he only pushed her shirt and bra out of the way. But, it seems like the author forgot about that because, by the time Copeland shows up, she's fully naked. It's a little frustrating.
Ashlyn
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Chapter 3:
I'm loving how we're being introduced to the guys in the band. Like, the author makes it pretty obvious to the reader who they are/will be, but the MC is totally in the dark. I love that.
— Oct 13, 2021 12:22PM
I'm loving how we're being introduced to the guys in the band. Like, the author makes it pretty obvious to the reader who they are/will be, but the MC is totally in the dark. I love that.
