Shonnie’s Reviews > Billionaire's Revenge > Status Update

And the it changed..... Not for the good but it still changed. This story is stupid. So what it's not the stupidest thing I've read. Can't wait to finish. Btw, I don't like a wimpy man. You can't be Alpha like one moment and then turn girly (emotional/clinging). #IJS

So the heroine doesn't have a car? I get he drove but you can't retrieve your car? It reads as if she doesn't have one. Also where is her job? How is she saving to move out of moms house with no job. Basically, the continuity is missing. My pet peeve is when you have very descriptive thoughts but missing continuity. Keep the story together!