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How, after Long Fighting, Galehaut Was Overcome by Lancelot Yet Was Not Slain and Made Great Speed to Yield to Friendship; Or, Galehaut, the Knight of the Forfeit (5/10)
Funny but long and wordy, and also very unclear as to what was going on.
— Oct 22, 2021 02:25PM
Funny but long and wordy, and also very unclear as to what was going on.
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Little Green Men (7/10)
A good story and a good interpretation of a tale but not very special in itself. Nothing really stood out to me.
— Oct 24, 2021 05:29PM
A good story and a good interpretation of a tale but not very special in itself. Nothing really stood out to me.
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White Hempen Sleeves (7/10)
I don’t get the reference to the legends (other than the play scene), but this is an interesting concept that was slightly confusing to read but still pretty interesting. I feel like there should’ve been more to it, but I liked this story.
— Oct 24, 2021 04:44PM
I don’t get the reference to the legends (other than the play scene), but this is an interesting concept that was slightly confusing to read but still pretty interesting. I feel like there should’ve been more to it, but I liked this story.
Chloe
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A Shadow in Amber (9/10)
I loved the way this was written, the setting, the mood, everything about this story. It was so interesting. And I love how the last line “she does not even know his real name,” even though we never learn her name. I loved this.
— Oct 24, 2021 03:53PM
I loved the way this was written, the setting, the mood, everything about this story. It was so interesting. And I love how the last line “she does not even know his real name,” even though we never learn her name. I loved this.
Chloe
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Once (Them) & Future (Us) (8/10)
This was good. It had a strange start and some of the dialogue was weird but otherwise I liked it.
— Oct 24, 2021 03:13PM
This was good. It had a strange start and some of the dialogue was weird but otherwise I liked it.
Chloe
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Flat White (9/10)
I liked the concept of this story, the main character, the way the legends were explained and twisted, and especially the way the story ends. This story is the taking back of your life from “destiny”, and I really loved it.
— Oct 24, 2021 09:15AM
I liked the concept of this story, the main character, the way the legends were explained and twisted, and especially the way the story ends. This story is the taking back of your life from “destiny”, and I really loved it.
Chloe
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Black Diamond (5/10)
It was a good premise, but baseball? Really? This could have been done so well! But the author chose to have a baseball setting. And the timeline was confusing too, as well as certain side plots that were mostly unnecessary, unless you really want to focus on the legends instead of creating an original story. This story wasn’t very good.
— Oct 24, 2021 07:54AM
It was a good premise, but baseball? Really? This could have been done so well! But the author chose to have a baseball setting. And the timeline was confusing too, as well as certain side plots that were mostly unnecessary, unless you really want to focus on the legends instead of creating an original story. This story wasn’t very good.
Chloe
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The Quay Stone (7/10)
This story demonstrates toxic relationships well and it was pretty good, but the ending was weird and the story itself was a bit confusing sometimes and could’ve been longer.
— Oct 24, 2021 05:40AM
This story demonstrates toxic relationships well and it was pretty good, but the ending was weird and the story itself was a bit confusing sometimes and could’ve been longer.
Chloe
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Jack and Brad and the Magician (8/10)
So sad but also very good. There were certain things I didn’t love but mostly I liked this story.
— Oct 24, 2021 04:57AM
So sad but also very good. There were certain things I didn’t love but mostly I liked this story.
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Heartbeat (8/10)
This was a powerful story that was Avery good twist of the classic “sword in the stone”. It was better than the original, honestly, and an important story to tell too. I didn’t love the writing style but otherwise, I liked this.
— Oct 23, 2021 06:45PM
This was a powerful story that was Avery good twist of the classic “sword in the stone”. It was better than the original, honestly, and an important story to tell too. I didn’t love the writing style but otherwise, I liked this.
Chloe
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Mayday (6/10)
I liked the format but the story itself was confusing (in part because I don’t know Arthurian legends but also because a lot of links between the information were missing). I could follow (barely) but it took a lot of thinking and wasn’t very fun. It would take thorough analysis to truly understand this story.
— Oct 23, 2021 06:13PM
I liked the format but the story itself was confusing (in part because I don’t know Arthurian legends but also because a lot of links between the information were missing). I could follow (barely) but it took a lot of thinking and wasn’t very fun. It would take thorough analysis to truly understand this story.
