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Rhiannon Frater
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I had to push through the first chapter, which surprised me. JL Bryan is one of my fav authors, but the first chapter didn't even read like his usual writing brilliance. I even checked to make sure he was the author. Things improved in the 2nd chapter and all is good now.
— Apr 02, 2014 08:15AM
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Rhiannon Frater
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The story continues to improve and I'm engrossed in it now. At this point I wish the first chapter didn't exist or was rewritten. In other words, don't let the first chapter turn you off of this story!
— Apr 03, 2014 09:31AM
