Hillary’s Reviews > Blinded > Status Update

This book is ok overall, but it certainly needs more editing for details. There have been several occurrences before the 88% mark, but for instance - Kym came over to ask how Mara's dinner went. Then, without Mara telling her about the dinner, Kym somehow knows that Anna had called Mara pathetic.
These types of missing details or time lines or mixups pull me out of the story.