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Ari
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The dialogue is clunky, but everything else is gorgeous. The metaphors, the visuals, the people ... idk Jade is too young to be making such sexual observations.
— Nov 02, 2021 11:26PM
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Ari
is on page 195 of 416
I take back what I said earlier. The dialogue is stylistic, not clunky.
— Nov 16, 2021 09:34AM
Ari
is on page 195 of 416
I take back what I said earlier. The dialogue is stylistic, not clunky.
— Nov 16, 2021 09:34AM
