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is 74% done
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Now that I've gotten into the rhythm of this book, being that it was a serial to begin, I have gotten used to the obligatory sex scene in each chapter. Doesn't move the plot forward for me. Some plot devices are over the top and some are quite genuine and touching. It's quite a mixed bag for me. There are times I look for a diversion and times that I'm really excited to read this.
— Apr 07, 2014 11:03AM
Now that I've gotten into the rhythm of this book, being that it was a serial to begin, I have gotten used to the obligatory sex scene in each chapter. Doesn't move the plot forward for me. Some plot devices are over the top and some are quite genuine and touching. It's quite a mixed bag for me. There are times I look for a diversion and times that I'm really excited to read this.
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— Apr 07, 2014 09:03PM
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Jerry
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I know I spend way too much time on planes, I guess that qualifies me for a WTF moment. A dime in your pocket will probably not show on a scanner. My watch is all metal and has never stopped me, neither has my wedding ring. Also they won't let you do more than 2 scans before they do a pat down, not in a room to the side. And one DOES NOT GO THRU SECURITY WHEN YOU LAND!
— Apr 02, 2014 08:30PM
I know I spend way too much time on planes, I guess that qualifies me for a WTF moment. A dime in your pocket will probably not show on a scanner. My watch is all metal and has never stopped me, neither has my wedding ring. Also they won't let you do more than 2 scans before they do a pat down, not in a room to the side. And one DOES NOT GO THRU SECURITY WHEN YOU LAND!
Jerry
is 36% done
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Overblown scenes, yet I think a toned down version would have given me the impression this was a real life story. Finn is great, but can be impatient with Aiden. Kaylee is cute and seems just what she is, not overblown. I am a succor for kids. Almost quit due to some of the overblown scenes.
— Apr 02, 2014 07:59PM
Overblown scenes, yet I think a toned down version would have given me the impression this was a real life story. Finn is great, but can be impatient with Aiden. Kaylee is cute and seems just what she is, not overblown. I am a succor for kids. Almost quit due to some of the overblown scenes.
