Starlight’s Reviews > Krol's Goddess > Status Update
Starlight
is 99% done
Too many inconsistencies and could’ve done without the excessive and unnecessary (as well as infuriatingly boring) info, like the inner monologues. Really would’ve been so much better if the actual details and story was improved and added on.
The negative space and off screen shit that happened doesn’t help. 🤷🏻♀️
God, I’m craving a good book rn.
This was so unsatisfactory.
— Nov 08, 2021 06:53PM
The negative space and off screen shit that happened doesn’t help. 🤷🏻♀️
God, I’m craving a good book rn.
This was so unsatisfactory.
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Starlight
is 34% done
I can’t with the numerous amounts of poor grammar. 🤦🏻♀️
Like just now, the “heroine” referred to herself as Anna.
Which ain’t her name. Ain’t nobody’s name or even close to it. In my mind now, I’m just imagining the “eater” animal to eat all these dipshits. Make the whole thing disappear from my library and memories.
WHAT A FUCKING SHIT SHOW
— Nov 07, 2021 03:14PM
Like just now, the “heroine” referred to herself as Anna.
Which ain’t her name. Ain’t nobody’s name or even close to it. In my mind now, I’m just imagining the “eater” animal to eat all these dipshits. Make the whole thing disappear from my library and memories.
WHAT A FUCKING SHIT SHOW
