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Ashlyn
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Ch. Pulse:
That was beautiful. I love how Domnall's arrogance and greed ended up being his downfall. I don't think they could have planned it better.
— Nov 12, 2021 03:41AM
That was beautiful. I love how Domnall's arrogance and greed ended up being his downfall. I don't think they could have planned it better.
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Ashlyn
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Ch. Something Sweet:
See, we're back at the plot hole. I don't see how Domnall can sense the magic that's in her bag, but not sense the arm band and the necklaces. I feel like there should have been something added to the story where the guys do something to prevent their items from being noticed by him.
— Nov 12, 2021 03:14AM
See, we're back at the plot hole. I don't see how Domnall can sense the magic that's in her bag, but not sense the arm band and the necklaces. I feel like there should have been something added to the story where the guys do something to prevent their items from being noticed by him.
Ashlyn
is on page 243 of 458
Ch. Cleanup:
So, there's a bit of a plot hole here. Domnall can supposedly sense witch/Hunter magic, yes? So, back at the house and just now, why didn't he notice that Adie has an arm band and necklaces that uses that magic? Like, even the guys noticed the arm band. And, both the arm band and necklaces were active during the fight, so Domnall should have noticed them and it's weird that he didn't.
— Nov 12, 2021 12:31AM
So, there's a bit of a plot hole here. Domnall can supposedly sense witch/Hunter magic, yes? So, back at the house and just now, why didn't he notice that Adie has an arm band and necklaces that uses that magic? Like, even the guys noticed the arm band. And, both the arm band and necklaces were active during the fight, so Domnall should have noticed them and it's weird that he didn't.
