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I'm kind of put off by the writing in this book. I mean, what happened? it's not like Captive Prince, but I don't mean theme-wise, that's irrelevant. The thing is the writting in CP was just fine, it was effective. This one is basic, repetitive, over-expositional... I'm quite surprised ._. Am I the only one seeing it?

I'm kind of put off by the writing in this book. I mean, what happened? it's not like Captive Prince, but I don't theme-wise, that's irrelevant. The thing is the writting in CP was just fine. This one is basic, repetitive, over-expositional... I'm quite surprised ._. Am I the only one seeing it?