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The story begins to coalesce. Some interesting characters. Wilf Netherton not one of them. A drunkard publicist - which kinda says it all. If your only reason for being is to burnish someone else's image do you even need to exist?
Nov 20, 2021 11:09AM
The Peripheral (Jackpot #1)

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Stephen is on page 60 of 485
True to Gibson MO. Dropped into a world a step or two forward tech-wise from today. He intros new tech and lingo explaining none of it expecting the reader to figure it out. Writing is shorty and punchy. The plot moves quickly but..every 5-50 pages you encounter a orphan sentence or two that reads like a remnant of a draft paragraph excised from the final copy and you go what the.... No idea where this is headed.
Oct 30, 2021 04:59PM
The Peripheral (Jackpot #1)


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carol. Ha!!


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