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Tim
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Something about this isn't really clicking with me. It feels very heavy handed with its messaging but also like the writing and sentence structure is overly simplistic. And on top of that I don't like any of the characters and the direction of the story is going towards a vigilante cop so.
— Nov 20, 2021 01:36PM
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Tim
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Interesting style so far. Broken up into short PoV chapters for various characters.
— Oct 12, 2021 09:39AM
