Jerss’s Reviews > When All the World Sleeps > Status Update

Very well written, and I do like it, but somehow the dominant character Bel is missing the " Mine.. mine... MINE! " instinct

n, but somehow the dominant character Bel is missing the " Mine.. mine... MINE! " instinct :(

Beginning to wonder if Bel is a saint or a man.

Like it that Bel is being careful.... though I hope he gets BAMF on Daniel soon!

Well written, and I really like how Bel does not quite know whats happening, and though he senses that he wants it ... he is not ready to look too closely and know what it is that's drawing him to Daniel.