Elithanathile’s Reviews > 245 Days > Status Update

// UGH!!

// Also a lifeless body means that the body is dead … Otherwise the body is just unconscious, get your fucking facts straight!!!

// Also I skipped toward the end a little bit and I see that you had Mike say that Taylor and Ashley would be great future mother and father to their future child and I have to say it’s idiotic that the author wrote it this way because the whole point of having two fathers is that neither one of them in any capacity is the mother!!

// Author I get that you’re in the throes of all your contrived drama … But I feel compelled to tell you that you’ve completely destroyed a great book by introducing this ridiculous plot line with the stepfather and the ex-boyfriend and all of that lunacy!! The sub plots that you’ve just introduced around 70% and onward is absolute garbage!!!

// And what pisses me off the fucking most about situations like this is that all the heads of all of these departments, the bigwigs, and all of the most powerful people are doing exactly what they tell the little people not to do!! They are the most devious and vile and corrupt!! This author is most definitely not fictionalizing this … This is very very real and it happens in real life all the time!!

// Such a good book 😊😊😊!!

// REALLY, AUTHOR, are you being serious?!? Everything is so explicit but you cannot use the word ass?!? SMH!!!

// An American mannerism I find incredibly incredibly incredibly aggravating and obnoxious is that they tend to butcher and shorten absolutely beautiful and unique and wonderful names into names that are common and plain and a lot of the time really ugly!! Why turn Charlotte into Charlie, even though Charlie is a nice name, or Philomena into Phil?!? Fucking stop it!!

// Wait a minute … So fraternizing is against the rules but it’s OK for this idiot to do what he’s doing in terms of trying to pawn his daughter off on the poor guy? Such a fucking backward and hypocritical perspective … But then again it’s an American university and so therefore I am not surprised in the slightest!!

// Adding to my previous update, also, with one set of parents so incredibly wonderful and gracious and accepting, I am incredibly irritated that they are not present on page in the book! Why is only the negative present? How about showing incredibly wonderful and supportive and accepting parents? This book is really great but also the author is a bit irritating!!