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The tense changes from past to present Willy billy. Sentences don’t make sense. ‘Reign’ should be ‘rein’ . Desperate need of an editor!!
— Nov 29, 2021 06:45AM
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Nov 29, 2021 07:24AM
Drafted auto correct! willy-nilly!!
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