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Ocean has an odd inclination to reach for one-liners, and it's woefully apparent in these opening poems. What slivers of beauty in these stanzas—and they are just that, slivers—that do exist are, more often than not, suffocated in lofty cliches. I'm just… eh.
— Nov 11, 2021 01:44PM

