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Rae Quigley
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The love is worse than twilight. The writing is good, aside from the dialogue not matching the characters.
— Apr 26, 2014 02:44PM
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Rae Quigley
is on page 292 of 312
Whenever there are intricate fight scenes in books I read it but nothing registers lol
— Apr 26, 2014 02:44PM
Rae Quigley
is on page 227 of 312
I was really starting to enjoy the story, and then it became this disgusting, cliché "teenage romance" that is actually worse than twilight so far.
— Apr 26, 2014 02:44PM
Rae Quigley
is on page 47 of 312
There are more creative ways to tell us about characters than to talk about how they wear outfits a lot or to actually literally list their characteristics under the pretense of the MC "reminiscing"
— Apr 26, 2014 02:43PM
Rae Quigley
is on page 43 of 312
Please make this chapter end OMG. It's literally been like 10 pages of "oh no metal might hit us"
— Apr 26, 2014 02:43PM
Rae Quigley
is on page 38 of 312
The story is good ... I think. But I don't like all the space and technical talks. It goes right over my head. I usually don't read fantasy, this might have to be a DNF for me.
— Apr 26, 2014 02:43PM
Rae Quigley
is on page 37 of 312
What does "1357 Earth Time" mean? Like the year? Or the actual time? I'm so confused
— Apr 26, 2014 02:43PM
Rae Quigley
is on page 30 of 312
Okay.... no 17 year old talks like this. Most of the characters don't speak like people would speak. It's written well, but almost too well... especially with the dialogue. And it's jumping all over the place. So confused.
— Apr 26, 2014 02:43PM
Rae Quigley
is on page 18 of 312
I can't get into it without more detail about the world. It just didn't set anything up for me.
— Apr 26, 2014 02:42PM
