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Jay Clark
is 5% done
I liked how the story just got going immediately. Swimming is very important in my own life and I instantly related to both the swimmer and the coach. The writing is brisk and airy without being too brief or too bubbly. It has punch and instant access to the minds, hearts and lives of the characters.
— May 04, 2014 12:53AM
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Jay Clark
is finished
The BDSM was not really my thing, but the characters more than made up for it, and I had to finish it, wanting to know what happened to them.
— Jan 25, 2015 11:39PM
Jay Clark
is 13% done
The story picked up quite a bit and is a fun intro to BDSM, but without it getting too strange, too fast. The romantic interaction between the coach and his former swimmer is hot and sexy, more so because the kid is emotionally damaged, and needs help.
— Dec 25, 2014 12:25AM
