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cindy is on page 160 of 316
Not really feeling it. This book is trying to be so many things and not doing so well. It's like an identity crisis of a book. And it suffers from trying to be quirky and accepting but ends up looking making these sort of Manic Pixie Dream girls/boys/people in general out of EVERYTHING. And I feel like it's more tell than show (almost exposition). And I'm bored. Ugh. I might not finish this
May 04, 2014 04:28AM
With This Heart

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cindy
cindy is on page 160 of 316
Not really feeling it.This book is trying to be so many things and not doing so well. It's like an identity crisis of a book. SO MANY CLICHES. And it suffers from trying to be quirky and accepting but ends up looking making these sort of Manic Pixie Dream girls/boys/people in general out of EVERYTHING. Bad delivery + I feel like it's more tell than show (almost exposition). And I'm bored. Ugh. I might not finish this
Jun 22, 2014 01:46AM
With This Heart


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