Heike’s Reviews > Femme > Status Update

The story has some funny moments. Doubtless. But I don't feel the chemistry. I don't even think Lionel want's a boyfriend. I don't think he has ever said or thought anything nice about Dog except that he is good in bed.
Doesn't help that the author does not seem to know that there is a difference between "you and me" and "you and I" and has not failed even once to use it wrong, and that editing in general is sloppy.