Meredith’s Reviews > Stone of Fire > Status Update

Finding it hard to get into. Got invested in the Indian nun—then she got killed. Now I’m being asked to get invested in a new character, but I don’t care that much about her or her family. Maybe she didn’t show enough personality before getting sucked into a tough situation.

There have also been several times that a person’s action and dialogue are split into separate paragraphs, and I get confused who’s speaking.