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not much is happening in the story which ngl im here for atm. but wow does it suffer from fic style writing of, 'he said, as he frowned worriedly', 'he said, as he turned around to smile worryingly', or 'he said, sighing'. so much sighing/frowning/adverbing in lieu of writing proper write-y stuff lol idk
— Jan 02, 2022 02:58PM
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Très Bien
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did the writing distract me bc how did i not realise until now that this is a doctor/patient relationship and the love interest-patient has no other choice?
— Jan 03, 2022 05:17AM
