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“Ghost started joining in the conversations and, gasp, even laughed a few times” No man "gasps." Why is her portrayal of what is supposed to be sexy foreign men seem like teenage girls?
— May 12, 2014 10:38PM
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“Tina. Tina this is my niece Ceecee. She’s named after Mom but this is easier for us.” Readers are not obtuse. Ceecee she's named after mom, that's it. No need to tell us you call her that because it's easier. No one cares and that's why she has a nickname in the first place. My biggest pet peeve has got to be authors outlining very single aspect of a book. Unnecessary details are annoying and insulting.
— May 12, 2014 10:38PM
