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Erin
is 85% done
Ah, but a few pages later, after stopping short of sex because they hear sounds and go to investigate, Urlick has to gather Eyelet up in his arms and carry/assist her in walking and then has to ask Eyelet if she's all right to stand on her own. Behold the magical powers of the prospect of sex!
— May 17, 2014 12:17PM
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Erin
is 85% done
Hmmm...does one really recover from lack of oxygen quickly enough that one moment they appear grey with blue lips and nail beds and the next they're ready to have sex? Seems like a colossal stretch to me.
— May 17, 2014 12:14PM
Erin
is 77% done
If I have to read someone saying, "how much do you trust me?" one more time, I may cry.
— May 17, 2014 11:10AM
Erin
is 44% done
Maybe it's an effect of "the vapours" they narrowly escaped, but why is Eyelet suddenly thinking Urlick's eyes are wonderful? She just got done accusing him of being a murderer. She is such a strangely fickle character to me so far.
— May 14, 2014 02:54PM
