Heike’s Reviews > Mr Fairfax, Mr West and the Meet Cute > Status Update
Heike
is 25% done
45% - I don't know. Maybe I received a faulty e-copy? This is so disjointed, I have to re-read every second paragraph because it seems I missed something. But I didn't. It's just missing how they came from A to B in the story. All. The. Time. Gives me a headache, so I'll call it quits here.
— Jan 07, 2022 02:28PM
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Heike
is 25% done
This reads as if someone forgot to proof read it, so jumpy and disconnected. I've read this author before, so I am pretty sure that is not her normal writing style ...
Very distracting!
— Jan 07, 2022 08:05AM
Very distracting!
