bookwormmama’s Reviews > Everwild > Status Update
bookwormmama
is 31% done
It's "lit" not "lighted" in that context. Ugh, usually bad editting is something I can mostly overlook. I'm going to stop pointing out errors now. Just beware.
— May 19, 2014 08:17AM
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bookwormmama
is 30% done
It not a "give in" it's a "given". I'm going to regret sticking with it at this point.
— May 19, 2014 08:13AM
bookwormmama
is 25% done
The evil witch literally has an I-will-be-the-most-powerful-in-the-world monologue. I'm invested enough in the story to keep reading and I love the cover, but these are just a couple examples of what awaits on every. single. page.
— May 19, 2014 08:00AM
bookwormmama
is 25% done
The story is interesting, but the writing is KILLING me. The dress was Willow's size, perfect, and absolutely stunning? Wow. She couldn't gasp because the ability to breath assailed her? I don't think that means what you think it means. He continued to lye on top of her? Editing requires more than relying on spell check.
— May 19, 2014 08:00AM
